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So now I have internet again, and a lot has changed. Unfortunately, The book signing has been canceled. Turns out a week before my book signing was happening the family gave us a week and a half notice that we were moving to Texas. So that is a thing now and I now have to reschedule for a different date in a different state. Will try to keep everyone updated on that.
Its Done. Finally.
I have finally finished the rewrite of book one. Almost ten years in the making, the book is now in a state which I feel much more satisfied with. Naturally I sped through this rewrite rather quickly and as a result there are a lot of grammar and spelling errors. Naturally it will take a while for me to go through and clean everything up but I would be extreamly grateful for any help offered. For those who would like to comment directly, the official document is linked here. I am also very interested in hearing about any other problems my readers may have noticed. Namely pacing issues, parts of the story that dragged on, or skipped over material you wish I had gone into more detail on, plot holes, or parts you really just did not like. If a particular chapter or scene board you please let me know. I will take no offense and, in fact will thank you. What Next: As stated I will be slowly cleaning up book one. I will now also begin uploading chapters of book two. Hope you are all as
Updates, Feedback + Dates -The Black Candy Circus
I am officially finished with the first draft of the rewrite for Book one. I have to say it has been a fun wild ride revisiting The Black Candy Circus, again after all this time. Still a little ways left to go but I can't thank you all enough for the encouragement and help I have received along the way. As you can see, I have the rest all pretty much planned out with release dates for each chapter and everything. I have also summarized all of the main changes that were made to each chapter and included links to those chapters. I still have a lot of work left to do, need to go back and clean up all the changes I just made. Will also need to hire an editor to go through and help me out with wording and grammar. Once I that's all done I will republish and get back to writing Book Two. Hope to see you all there. The Witch Hunter Chronicles: Book 1: The Witch of the Black Candy Circus < Book 2: The Witch's Black Book Book 3: The Witch Hunters and the Sword of Eden Changes I Made So
Updating the Update
So as of tomorrow I will be updating chapters 1-14. As I have been writing, I have been getting wonderful feedback from you the community and I have been taking notes. Recently I went through and applied all those notes to the master google doc and now I just need to copy all those changes here in DA. That will happen tomorrow. Just a heads up but there have been a few minor plot changes and adjustments here and there as well as a few extra details added along the way. I had a particularly fun time with chapter 4. Also, yes. As of today I have finished editing chapter 14. If you want to read that now you can click the link to my google doc here. Still need to make a title card for it but that is already comming together. Chapter 15 will also likely be finished tomorrow also, so expect that to come out a little later this week. Anyway, thanks for all the feedback and help I have been getting along the way. A special shout out to Bruno-Bluthgeld. Your partnership has been a literal
Updates and Feedback - The Black Candy Circus
Hello Everyone. Its been a while but I am back and for my next project I am diligently rewriting and editing my first novel, The Black Candy Circus. As I continue I would much appreciate to get some feedback on some of the changes I have been making. For those of you who aren't familiar with this book, the story is a sort of modern day Hansel and Gretel. Two siblings get a job at a circus that is run by a sadistic witch with a habit of turning her employees into animals for her show. They both notice the danger too late however and spend the rest of the story trying to escape. Changes I Made So Far, and Plan To Make Here is the link to the origonal complete 2015 draft: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XwyX-DHKWpGHyvq140-CB-9nZFR1rG_gh3niS9KUVSA/edit?usp=sharing Chapter 1: Deleted a tone of exposition. Whole paragraphs. A mistake I made as a budding writer was that I crammed all my character traits, backstory and descriptions right in the beginning. Even worse I didn't even
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I was wondering if this was gonna get canceled because of the move...
Oh well, you'll just have to organize a new one in Texas. ^_^ And I shall keep telling people about your books too, because goodness knows your stories deserve more recognition.
Oh well, you'll just have to organize a new one in Texas. ^_^ And I shall keep telling people about your books too, because goodness knows your stories deserve more recognition.